The weakest author:
It has many grammar mistake , and it made me a little confused about this sentence. In the (1) “Bridget was a friend very active who really always had an ambition of travelling and explores the world.” is one such example. (2)"The blanket with 200 years has been used by almost 3 generations before him." All in all, the structure is good, but there are too many grammar mistakes.
The best author:
I like the organization of the story, it attracts our eyes. For example: In the first paragraph, it wrote(3) " Pendo thought that she never had an exciting life as her job offered no adventures. So, one day she thought of leaving everything and fulfilling her lifelong dream of traveling the world and finding true happiness." It is a good transition. Then, the next paragraph can turn into the topic sentence.
(4) The paragraph in this story has a good connection with each other, then, it makes us understood well. For example: In the third paragraph, it wrote" Next her stop is Germany." And in the fourth paragraph, it wrote " After, she went to Italy."
(1)http://en191f12s28lorissen.blogspot.com/September 4, 2012
(3)http://elenaen191f12s28.blogspot.com/September 4, 2012
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